A love, eternal

Here is the latest entry for the 3WW ! 🙂

In that one magical moment , the joy lingered
The words were lost in a silence, revered
The only thing that she ever did dread
Was that she’d never feel the same, instead –

In his warm grasp did she rest in ease
No more torment of the world , at peace
As they looked onto each others eyes
They smile, a perpetuity in paradise!

No burdens of the world or rage , to pacify
No more wretched lechers , or barefaced lies
For tonight , they did rest in an eternal slumber
to lead on a lifetime in the beyond, together


8 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Vivek
    May 20, 2010 @ 13:30:05

    So there is life beyond the mundane:D

    Very ‘hatke’ from your usual theme. ‘No burdens of the world or rage , to pacify’- like that 🙂


  2. ThomG
    May 20, 2010 @ 19:38:54

    loved how you weaved the 3WW words through this. Great lines, a complete package.


  3. Tim Remp
    May 20, 2010 @ 22:25:01

    ‘Sigh’ the wonderful afterlife and the great race we are all running in called mundane. Wonderful piece.




  4. Dee
    May 21, 2010 @ 09:20:10

    Very romantic and peaceful 🙂


  5. Teal
    May 22, 2010 @ 06:30:20

    @Vivek : Thanks, I thought of trying a different angle – for a change 🙂
    @ThomG : Thank you so much 😀
    @ Tim : Yes, very true!
    @ Dee : Thanks a ton 😀


  6. Jingle
    Oct 22, 2010 @ 23:21:05

    what a divine piece.
    smart write.


  7. Jingle
    Oct 22, 2010 @ 23:21:18

    I invite you to attend Thursday Poets Rally week 31
    let me know when you are ready.
    Thanks a lot.


  8. Teal
    Oct 23, 2010 @ 22:39:08

    @jingle : thanks, would love to be a part, but hasn’t it started already?


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