That abandoned thought


Oh look , for how steep the cliff lies
It’s harsh rugged edges, so very precise
The mind it got a wee bit dizzy
And turned back from the cliff, in a frenzy

Oh look , for how fast, the current it runs
Gradual outnumbering of odds – millions to none
The mind,it sees it’s cowardice reflection
it backs out from that watered marsh region

Oh think now, you coward heart!
An end is no good – get a new , head start
A smile, a shrug of shoulders, done
And the thought of cease – did abandon!

The above poem was an entry for this week’sΒ  3ww

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10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Vivek
    May 27, 2010 @ 10:53:07

    Look,think and abandon indeed!

    Reply

  2. ThomG
    May 27, 2010 @ 21:47:54

    nicely done.

    Reply

  3. Andy Sewina
    May 28, 2010 @ 03:55:19

    Yeah, nice thought! You did well to get the three little words in!!

    Reply

  4. gautami tripathy
    May 28, 2010 @ 07:00:49

    Good work!

    undefined paths

    Reply

  5. pia
    May 28, 2010 @ 07:23:14

    I trick myself into thinking I’m going to abandon things and then…

    Reply

  6. San
    May 28, 2010 @ 12:19:32

    πŸ™‚ nicely done.
    “Oh look , for how fast, the current it runs
    Gradual outnumbering of odds – millions to none”
    i really like that.

    Reply

  7. Teal
    May 28, 2010 @ 17:52:46

    @Vivek πŸ™‚
    @ThomG, Andy and Gautami : Thank you! πŸ™‚
    @Pia : Sometimes, abandoning these thoughts of cowardice is good.
    @San : Thank you πŸ™‚

    Reply

  8. Tim Remp
    May 28, 2010 @ 20:48:14

    Wow… nicely put.

    -Tim

    Reply

  9. pieceofpie
    May 31, 2010 @ 03:19:35

    i like this where this carefree process goes…

    Reply

  10. Teal
    Jun 01, 2010 @ 09:20:38

    @Tim , @PieceofPie : Thank you πŸ™‚

    Reply

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