The re-union

For this week’s 3WW 😀

The neglect, hatred and unresolved rage
belies their exteriors, smiling like a serene sage
It is not often for that they were to meet
so in complete exhilaration – each other,greet

One feels the emotions galore,
sealed ‘neath jaws of a cramp – threatening to explode
The other sits in complete nonchalance
Showing no frenzy or a state , of inward trance

With the aromas of the cups of heaven
in idle chatter they abused time
The one left with their own emotional baggage
as the other walked away, crossing every line…


6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Thomma Lyn
    Jul 29, 2010 @ 09:38:03

    Oh, this speaks so well to the proverbial “elephant in the living room” — tension between two people that is almost unbearable, yet still they do not want to speak of it.


  2. Teal
    Jul 29, 2010 @ 10:24:42

    @thoma : thank you 🙂 i was trying to describe something more or less on the same lines 😀


  3. Ramesh Sood
    Jul 29, 2010 @ 16:32:58

    Weel written.. beautiful way to portray emotions.. not uncommon in the real worls..


  4. Leo
    Jul 29, 2010 @ 21:07:11

    wonderful poem. well written..!


  5. pieceofpie
    Aug 01, 2010 @ 03:10:40

    oh i like this a lot… the give and take…


  6. Teal
    Aug 01, 2010 @ 19:29:00

    @ Ramesh , Leo and Pieceofpie : thank you 🙂


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